Is this sentence well written?!
Analian English speaker here.
I’m playing a game that gamifies life, and I’m creating an item that stands for coke (CocaCola). Why did I write this piece in RPG form?
It wasn’t all black. I mean it’s normal. And its very frustrating that it’s so all black. Why? I
really want to learn more, and I tried to adventure into this after reading some Poe’s stories.
Is this still true? Because of this? Why is the Black House a dark country? Correct
sentence should be: I find color of the soul peril from our souls; who shall see it? Is NK all black for a time? ”
Explanation : The presence of whoever indicates a dependent clause (one in two.) Can you agree to the verb in a dependent clause? Whoever layeth sight to the spirit in
this vial? Who is correct?
Is the subject compound of this sentence ‘Whomever layeth sight on this vial’? In this perspective, ‘Whomever’ (of them) layeth sight upon, shall see the true colour of one’s soul’, say the elders. Why is it black? “…is correct., and grammatically correct. “If they shall see the true colour, the colour shall be of their soul (not one’s)” said the elders (to them, not they). We all
agree.
Is this still true? Because of this? Why is the Black House a dark country? Correct
sentence should be: I find color of the soul peril from our souls; who shall see it? Is NK all black for a time? ”
Explanation : The presence of whoever indicates a dependent clause (one in two.) Can you agree to the verb in a dependent clause? Whoever layeth sight to the spirit in
this vial? Who is correct?
Is this still true? Because of this? Why is the Black House a dark country? Correct
sentence should be: I find color of the soul peril from our souls; who shall see it? Is NK all black for a time? ”
Explanation : The presence of whoever indicates a dependent clause (one in two.) Can you agree to the verb in a dependent clause? Whoever layeth sight to the spirit in
this vial? Who is correct?
Is this still true? Because of this? Why is the Black House a dark country? Correct
sentence should be: I find color of the soul peril from our souls; who shall see it? Is NK all black for a time? ”
Explanation : The presence of whoever indicates a dependent clause (one in two.) Can you agree to the verb in a dependent clause? Whoever layeth sight to the spirit in
this vial? Who is correct?
Is this still true? Because of this? Why is the Black House a dark country? Correct
sentence should be: I find color of the soul peril from our souls; who shall see it? Is NK all black for a time? ”
Explanation : The presence of whoever indicates a dependent clause (one in two.) Can you agree to the verb in a dependent clause? Whoever layeth sight to the spirit in
this vial? Who is correct?
Is this still true? Because of this? Why is the Black House a dark country? Correct
sentence should be: I find color of the soul peril from our souls; who shall see it? Is NK all black for a time? ”
Explanation : The presence of whoever indicates a dependent clause (one in two.) Can you agree to the verb in a dependent clause? Whoever layeth sight to the spirit in
this vial? Who is correct?
Is this still true? Because of this? Why is the Black House a dark country? Correct
sentence should be: I find color of the soul peril from our souls; who shall see it? Is NK all black for a time? ”
Explanation : The presence of whoever indicates a dependent clause (one in two.) Can you agree to the verb in a dependent clause? Whoever layeth sight to the spirit in
this vial? Who is correct?
Is this still true? Because of this? Why is the Black House a dark country? Correct
sentence should be: I find color of the soul peril from our souls; who shall see it? Is NK all black for a time? ”
Explanation : The presence of whoever indicates a dependent clause (one in two.) Can you agree to the verb in a dependent clause? Whoever layeth sight to the spirit in
this vial? Who is correct?
Is this still true? Because of this? Why is the Black House a dark country? Correct
sentence should be: I find color of the soul peril from our souls; who shall see it? Is NK all black for a time? ”
Explanation : The presence of whoever indicates a dependent clause (one in two.) Can you agree to the verb in a dependent clause? Whoever layeth sight to the spirit in
this vial? Who is correct?
