Differences between “as,” non-nor, “or,” and “neither… nor”
What is the correct sense by which they are using parallelism for the following sentence?
The place where you are born is not a choice, as it is not the family into which you are born. If you give birth in a world where people live forever, what will you give to them for having a meaningful experience?
If the above sentence uses correct parallelism, can I reduce it as follows?
Where I am born is not a choice, it is a family. Many people believe the place I am born is a choice, or that my choice is not my choice. Have you read “Croation is the birthplace”?
The
country in which you were born is not your choice and thus neither is your family. You pick your own language and religion. And if you pick your own country, where you were born doesn’t matter.
Would the following expressions with “nor” (or), “also… nor” be useful alternatives with correct parallelism of the original example?
If you are born within a certain radius, you wouldn’t have to choose where you are born the way that you choose your family.
They say you can’t choose your country for the rest of your life. But you can choose your family to be good and be good.
I don’t respect your country, but I do respect my country.
The same is
true with the first sentence of the movie ‘The Place Where We Are Born’. It’s true that the place where you are born is not a choice, it’s not the family into which you are born. It’s true that the first sentence was “The place” in the film.
Doesn’t make sense in my opinion. The sentence could be rewritten if you changed a few
words in the sentence: they say the place where you are born is no choice, because the place where you are born is not the family into which you are born.
However, the last three examples you give are accurate juxtapose and compare birthplace and family. My choice of three that you choose is a question of style, not of correctness of meaning.
I would probably prefer the style of the first alternative sentence you give:
Thesis Says that you don’t choose where you are born, nor do you choose your family…/s.
There is no original parallel structure to an example sentence.
The same is
true with the first sentence of the movie ‘The Place Where We Are Born’. It’s true that the place where you are born is not a choice, it’s not the family into which you are born. It’s true that the first sentence was “The place” in the film.
Doesn’t make sense in my opinion. The sentence could be rewritten if you changed a few
words in the sentence: they say the place where you are born is no choice, because the place where you are born is not the family into which you are born.
However, the last three examples you give are accurate juxtapose and compare birthplace and family. My choice of three that you choose is a question of style, not of correctness of meaning.
I would probably prefer the style of the first alternative sentence you give:
Thesis Says that you don’t choose where you are born, nor do you choose your family…/s.
There is no original parallel structure to an example sentence.
Most of your alternate sentences are somewhat correct..although I would never use them. The family in which you are born is not a choice?
Is this technique completely unnecessary and makes the second part of the sentence more concise?
As other people have said, your first example doesn’t have the meaning you want, because “it” is not read as a dummy subject. What would you do?
If you leave out “it”, you get something that almost works?
What’s your choice? The place where you are born,,, not the family in which you’re born.
However it doesn’t quite work, because there is no satisfactory placement for the ‘not’. Can a person express his or her belief
that the place where he is born is out of their control?
grammatically, this is easily understandable. If you know me or I am confused but I would like to have some tips please!
The place you are born is not a choice, neither
are the family into which you are born. What do you think about this?
It turns out that “the
place where you’re born is not a choice” and that the family into which you’re born could make a difference.
Why does one guy talk about his future and how will he make changes from now on?
As other people have said, your first example doesn’t have the meaning you want, because “it” is not read as a dummy subject. What would you do?
If you leave out “it”, you get something that almost works?
What’s your choice? The place where you are born,,, not the family in which you’re born.
However it doesn’t quite work, because there is no satisfactory placement for the ‘not’. Can a person express his or her belief
that the place where he is born is out of their control?
grammatically, this is easily understandable. If you know me or I am confused but I would like to have some tips please!
The place you are born is not a choice, neither
are the family into which you are born. What do you think about this?
It turns out that “the
place where you’re born is not a choice” and that the family into which you’re born could make a difference.
Why does one guy talk about his future and how will he make changes from now on?
As other people have said, your first example doesn’t have the meaning you want, because “it” is not read as a dummy subject. What would you do?
If you leave out “it”, you get something that almost works?
What’s your choice? The place where you are born,,, not the family in which you’re born.
However it doesn’t quite work, because there is no satisfactory placement for the ‘not’. Can a person express his or her belief
that the place where he is born is out of their control?
grammatically, this is easily understandable. If you know me or I am confused but I would like to have some tips please!
The place you are born is not a choice, neither
are the family into which you are born. What do you think about this?
It turns out that “the
place where you’re born is not a choice” and that the family into which you’re born could make a difference.
Why does one guy talk about his future and how will he make changes from now on?
The place in which you are born is not a choice, nor is the family into which you are born.
What does a good apologist say about a poor or outdated document?
The same is
true with the first sentence of the movie ‘The Place Where We Are Born’. It’s true that the place where you are born is not a choice, it’s not the family into which you are born. It’s true that the first sentence was “The place” in the film.
Doesn’t make sense in my opinion. The sentence could be rewritten if you changed a few
words in the sentence: they say the place where you are born is no choice, because the place where you are born is not the family into which you are born.
However, the last three examples you give are accurate juxtapose and compare birthplace and family. My choice of three that you choose is a question of style, not of correctness of meaning.
I would probably prefer the style of the first alternative sentence you give:
Thesis Says that you don’t choose where you are born, nor do you choose your family…/s.
There is no original parallel structure to an example sentence.
The place in which you are born is not a choice, nor is the family into which you are born.
What does a good apologist say about a poor or outdated document?
The same is
true with the first sentence of the movie ‘The Place Where We Are Born’. It’s true that the place where you are born is not a choice, it’s not the family into which you are born. It’s true that the first sentence was “The place” in the film.
Doesn’t make sense in my opinion. The sentence could be rewritten if you changed a few
words in the sentence: they say the place where you are born is no choice, because the place where you are born is not the family into which you are born.
However, the last three examples you give are accurate juxtapose and compare birthplace and family. My choice of three that you choose is a question of style, not of correctness of meaning.
I would probably prefer the style of the first alternative sentence you give:
Thesis Says that you don’t choose where you are born, nor do you choose your family…/s.
There is no original parallel structure to an example sentence.
