Why should I add more commas in my thesis statements?
Thesis Statement: ” Between both republics, the second republic is more advantageous for interest groups than the first republic because of the continuous increase size of government. Note: What
s Your Prosecutor and why?
I think adding a comma should give more clarity. What do you think of it – about this?
Due to the continuous increasing size of government, the second republic offers interest groups more advantage than the first republic.
Shorter, and I think captures what you’re after.
