What is the equivalent and what equivalence is substituted for the greater effect?
In a technical report, I wrote in “The larger A is, the greater effect B has on C”. Then, a native speaker suggested me do something about “The greater effect” since it’s a little bit weird. However, he didn’t mention any specific better equivalent.
What are some good options to choose from?
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The larger a is, the larger effect B has on C.
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The larger A is, the deeper effect B has on C.