What is the equivalent and what equivalence is substituted for the greater effect?

In a technical report, I wrote in “The larger A is, the greater effect B has on C”. Then, a native speaker suggested me do something about “The greater effect” since it’s a little bit weird. However, he didn’t mention any specific better equivalent.

What are some good options to choose from?

  • The larger a is, the larger effect B has on C.

  • The larger A is, the deeper effect B has on C.

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