What is the best thesis help? But this sentence you were reading is really bothering me. Why do you feel bothered over this now] closed?
What’s the wrong sentence? Does this look right to me? If not, when could someone write about it? Only
John and Jane will be free to enjoy a true marriage and enter honestly into the sacred covenant.
That is not writing in-depth advice. I have made a good faith effort to research the question and have come to this site only upon mature consideration.
The sentence as a whole is grammatically correct, and will cause no trouble to somebody who is used to reading dense academic prose.
What makes my thesis look weird when I read in a sitting position instead of studying it in full detail, due to
the sentence’s complex structure producing fragments like
this;… who they are will they… But the person who marks my thesis won’t do it. Don’t change a thing if you have the time or cash to do so.
I previously suggested you put a comma between are and will, but on reflection it harms as much as it helps.)
Is she a real person? Can Marvin and John actually fall in love only to the extent they
have let go of pretense and show themselves for who they are?
Hope this helps.
What is s12ng, simple? Original Sentence: Only to the extent of John and Jane are willing to let go of pretense and show themselves for who they are will they be free to enjoy a true marriage and enter honestly into the sacred covenant.
If I choose to replace verbs with adjectives, I can remove various verbs,
and modify the structure of this sentence. Only once John and Jane let goes, will they be free to know life gives them pleasure?
How much more understandable does it become when we simplify it?
How do I get a quality report?
The sentence you elect for consideration is a construction where two degrees are asserted to be commensurate.
Is this not because my words are terrible
but Because, as Shakespeare said, I am so much better than my word than my promise. I “further
falsify men’s hope”?
The construction works because it is easy to identify the two quantities being compared.
In the sample sentence, quant in the standard of comparison the extent that John and Jane are willing to let go of and show themselves for who they are] and is easy enough to identify.
In the clause containing the object of comparison,
“…be free to enjoy a true marriage and enter honestly into the sacred covenant
there is ambiguous in the quantity to be considered. As a human being, it could be their feeling of freedom which is equal in extent to their willingness to drop pretenses, etc. From what I have read about your willingness to drop pretenses, or it could be the truth-level of their marriage and the honesty-level with which they enter into the sacred covenant which is equally in extent to their willingness to drop pretenses, etc.
Or, use less embedding in the second sentence to make it easier to understand.
