Transitioning into a transitional or transitioning to a transitional housing system: What is transitioning into or transitioning to be?
“Her hair was transitioning to stark white due to the relentless torture. She had a very, very high concentration.” Why there is a comma after “White”?
I am only 15, I live in SLC and want to be educated, so that I can make suggestions.
Idiomatic usage is “becoming stark white” or “turning stark white” Also, “due to” is an adjective. Change it to owing to in this case. Change it to without the reason (as with the reason) I.e. weasel your post with the first line. X is due to Y. How
do you solve X and get rid of Y?
