Do phrases and idioms like “state-of-the-art” appropriate for formal technical recommendation report?

I am supposed to write a technical recommendation report for my English class. Am I supposed to write a technical recommendation report for my English class? What is the best endpoint protection software to protect a web server? Why do I write some sentences of poetry?

How do I use advanced software to build a computer?

Does this paragraph sound formal enough? Why is it better to be phrased in a recommendation report?

I also wrote an alternate version of this, but I am not sure what makes it any better.

Moreover, with new and more advanced complications within the security of the digital industry emerging every day, it is essential for the software to be equipped with an ultramodern technology that could build a strong defense against more developed threats.

Which one sounds more suitable for me?

What is the best way to define the “correct” language for a subject?

Asked on March 3, 2021 in Other.
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It seems “cutting edge” is better for this field in general, although I don’t know how to put it in vocab. I only have 7 seconds left. Why do some software designers insisted they omit recent technology advancements to protect against

IT security risk?

Answered on March 3, 2021.
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