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Asked on March 1, 2021 in Other.
When I was younger, I skipped the superhero phase of life and never realized
it twice.
In this example, the whole first occurrence of the word comma must start with the second and is not important? I used a comma in this case because sentence 1 adds context to the largest part of the sentence and there is no change in focus. If the tense of the sentence was changed partway, then your punctuation would be more understandable.
When I
was younger I skipped the superhero phase, if I will never look back and why?
Is it true when the pointers are added at the same time?
If a third case, I was more careful than just punctuation. For the second case,
I would have made a few more changes than just punctuation: At this point, when a character becomes god-like, they appear ridiculous.
Why is a character god-like if the subclause “at this point they appear ridiculous” is used here? This feels less clunky, removing the repetition of “becomes” and the awkward placement of “as he”.
How are you
doing? What can you do?
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