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Asked on March 26, 2021 in Grammar.
The same is
true with the first sentence of the movie ‘The Place Where We Are Born’. It’s true that the place where you are born is not a choice, it’s not the family into which you are born. It’s true that the first sentence was “The place” in the film.
Doesn’t make sense in my opinion. The sentence could be rewritten if you changed a few
words in the sentence: they say the place where you are born is no choice, because the place where you are born is not the family into which you are born.
However, the last three examples you give are accurate juxtapose and compare birthplace and family. My choice of three that you choose is a question of style, not of correctness of meaning.
I would probably prefer the style of the first alternative sentence you give:
Thesis Says that you don’t choose where you are born, nor do you choose your family…/s.
There is no original parallel structure to an example sentence.
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Asked on March 26, 2021 in Grammar.
The same is
true with the first sentence of the movie ‘The Place Where We Are Born’. It’s true that the place where you are born is not a choice, it’s not the family into which you are born. It’s true that the first sentence was “The place” in the film.
Doesn’t make sense in my opinion. The sentence could be rewritten if you changed a few
words in the sentence: they say the place where you are born is no choice, because the place where you are born is not the family into which you are born.
However, the last three examples you give are accurate juxtapose and compare birthplace and family. My choice of three that you choose is a question of style, not of correctness of meaning.
I would probably prefer the style of the first alternative sentence you give:
Thesis Says that you don’t choose where you are born, nor do you choose your family…/s.
There is no original parallel structure to an example sentence.
- 675791 views
- 11 answers
- 249493 votes
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Asked on March 26, 2021 in Grammar.
The same is
true with the first sentence of the movie ‘The Place Where We Are Born’. It’s true that the place where you are born is not a choice, it’s not the family into which you are born. It’s true that the first sentence was “The place” in the film.
Doesn’t make sense in my opinion. The sentence could be rewritten if you changed a few
words in the sentence: they say the place where you are born is no choice, because the place where you are born is not the family into which you are born.
However, the last three examples you give are accurate juxtapose and compare birthplace and family. My choice of three that you choose is a question of style, not of correctness of meaning.
I would probably prefer the style of the first alternative sentence you give:
Thesis Says that you don’t choose where you are born, nor do you choose your family…/s.
There is no original parallel structure to an example sentence.
- 675791 views
- 11 answers
- 249493 votes
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Asked on March 26, 2021 in Grammar.
The same is
true with the first sentence of the movie ‘The Place Where We Are Born’. It’s true that the place where you are born is not a choice, it’s not the family into which you are born. It’s true that the first sentence was “The place” in the film.
Doesn’t make sense in my opinion. The sentence could be rewritten if you changed a few
words in the sentence: they say the place where you are born is no choice, because the place where you are born is not the family into which you are born.
However, the last three examples you give are accurate juxtapose and compare birthplace and family. My choice of three that you choose is a question of style, not of correctness of meaning.
I would probably prefer the style of the first alternative sentence you give:
Thesis Says that you don’t choose where you are born, nor do you choose your family…/s.
There is no original parallel structure to an example sentence.
- 675791 views
- 11 answers
- 249493 votes