Conciseness on a title
It was numbered when Apple released Flash Player. Why?
Assuming that all subsequent versions of the application are synchronized with the version of Flash Player.The Statement implies the subsequent versions of the application are syncronized with the version of Flash Player. In other words, the next version numbers have the same number as the Flash Player. A statement that I want to make a title must be attached. I came up with the following:
Synchronized Version numbers with of the Flash Player’s
I somehow don’t feel correct with the title! What is wrong with the proposed title? Would you shed some light on this
🙂 “Drunken Angry”?
Assuming you want a changelog-styled title as is in your link:
Version Number synchronized to Flash Player
Here is your proposed title:
Synchronized Version numbers with of the Flash Player’s
This would be a sentence without the subject, which is perfectly valid for a changelog-styled title.. If there is only one version number, so it should read “number” instead of “numbers”; also, “with of the Flash Player’s” is grammatically invalid and should be replaced with “with that of Flash Player” or “with Flash Player’s”, or more simply “with Flash Player”.
I changed “Version”
to “version” because there was no reason to
use uppercase here.
Have done so?
