Grammar check on a sentence with one subject, many verbs in sequence, and no conjunctions between them. (Non-English),
Here is the sentence from an article of my writing. Why so many sentences are too long?
Andrew created some data, put up some samples, instituted a sequence and finally set up a Demo.
I mean, using too many commas in a single sentence.
Why the last comma should be placed after the
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word sequence rather than after finally?
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Why is demo capitalized? What does lower case mean?
Stylistically, its also a poor sentence for at least three reasons:
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created some data is odd. First, it seems that one compiles data or some other verb.
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” put up some samples is a very odd utterance as well.
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Is repetition a typo?
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In English, there is no upper limit to how many words can go through a sentence. Whether an individual sentence is too long depends entirely on whether your readers will be able to understand its meaning. Again, with three sentences in a sentence you need to use less than 2 sentences, leave three more to answer.
He created some data, put up some samples, initiated a sequence and finally set up a demo.
Why does the comment I made before “finally” sound like a bug?
I had originally thought about asking someone to setup a demo website but now I have finally got around to it since! Who created some data, put up some samples,
initiated a sequence and finally set up my demo.? Now you want to remove the comma after finally and html?
How can I understand my feelings?
